I love these.
I love these.
thank you
You did a decent job, and I liked the general feel of it. The animation may have been rough but it was pretty smoothe! I love how they are knocking themselves out to stop him.
thanks :)!
I enjoy the story, and its put together well but its hard to sit through parts like where they are talking at the beginning. Other than that the only complaint would be animation which is just something you improve over time XD
Yeah I know but as I said in the description this was soon after i learnt flash lol
I love the idea and you did well telling the story.
I do have two main issues though which will improve in time with practice XD
The animation is a bit lacking compared to the clear voice quality, but the story is enough to keep me here through it. Fight scenes like at the beginning would do well with being just a bit faster and smoother.
The voice acting is great, but the sound editing needs to be improved a bit as the sound doesen't all fit the atmosphere quite as well as it should. The ambiance is alright but needs to be worked in a bit better with the speaking, a good place to point out where better editing is needed is again during the fight scene everything sounded a bit off. Make me feel like I'm in the fight with them with the sound, not someone peaking from the background.
thanx heaps buddy I found this critique to be extremely helpful. I am going to submit the next installment to this story tonight, but I will put this advice to good use with the next project I do :D cause I need all the help I can get lol
Its still kind of entertaining, and whats done is alright. I'd laugh pretty hard if he had facial emotions through all of this while not moving.
Well like I said, It's been a year since I've even touched this project so there was no hope in finishing this, may as well upload this right lol xD
That was interesting! Where did you get inspiration for the piles faces? XD
From my twisted brain. :)
I loved the ending, but I see some pixelation issues when they teleport (look at the guy left behind)
That's video corruption, something that's beyond my control.
It's not as bad when you watch it higher qualities.
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