jecjoker's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Not anymore]

I'm likeing it! The coloring is smooth and flows with with both her and the background, the shading gives her the proper demensions and shows a clear source of light. Her body is perfectly perportioned for her size.
There however are a few things I have to point out that stands out as wrong ot me.
1-though mostly smoothe the lighting and shading becomes a bit angular/blocky where the lighting is brighter which makes it seem a bit rushes (right leg)
2-her left knee is a bit too angular, acception for her left shoulder due to how skinny she is...
3-her head/kneck seems to be bent a but out of place, a bit too far foward/too the right.

HappyEndings responds:

1. I was trying to show that the light being diffracted. I might have implemented it wrong. I'll look into it.

2. Yeah, someone pointed that out to me earlier. I'll remember to fix it in the future.

3. Gotcha.

Thank you for the critique, yo. :)

[What Does Your Soul Look Like]

I wanted to avoid this, but I had to give it five stars....I love the style of it (reminds me a bit of something from an anime like avatar tla, though more abstract (I know its not an abstract painting dont take it that way). Though it lacks background and focuses on the same colours with diffrent shades it just has soo much life to it! I wouldent be surprized if it suddenly became animated!
The body is perfectly perportional for a humanoid figure, the shading shows a clear light source, and the coloring is PERFECT for this kind of illustration!

[The Snake]

I love it! The pencil shade is just so perfect that it gives her a pop out 3d feeling. 99% of the lines and proportions look correct for her figure with the acception of her right (our left) crotch line needing just a tad bit more definition. The shading....it gives it a feeling as if it is in colour as well as showing a proper lightsource! (almost directly above her likely a tad foward from her)
The only thing I found that really bugged me and thats just a tiny bit, is that the snakes neck is a bit smaller then it should be for how large the body is (id probably make the head a tad bigger as well)

[M&A]

I'm loving this entry so far! The color of the girls flows with the background and there surroundings. The shading points out a deffinit lightsource to the mid/upper right. The forums and shapes of the bodies are near perfectly proportional which is just fine for humans who come in all shaps and sizes (I'm assuming they are human...) You even went as far to add lines to they're feet and around the bending of there bodies!
However...there is one slight thing that bothers me.
The coloring/lighting of the bodies look just a tad blocky/angular, as well as this the change in size of both the women seem about the same which makes it a bit harder to percieve that one is farther back than the other.

[Roofies]

Personally, I kinda like this style. But there are quite a few things wrong here in my opinion...
1-Though most of her body has near perfect perportions her arms look a tad bit noodly and her right arm looks bent a bit too low. The one other problem in relation (probably just me) but how her head was done makes it look a bit too circular, the hair could flow a bit smoother in and outward to fix this problem, though it could just be her hairstyle :).
2-I'm relation to the frist problem her hands and arms get a bit too thin compared to the rest of her body, the tie on her arms could use a bit more definition looks more like an armband.
3-From how shes positioned on her legs id have to say we should be seeing or are seeing mainly her right side which just throws the whole picture off for me, and heres why. Some features on her left side seem to be favored and make to look a bit bigger even though they are farther away, as well as that butfrom her bottom legs (knee and up) she seems to be turning her back more in our direction (her knees and bottom legs need to be tilter more knees go in to the left and legs come out ot the right)
4-Lat but not least the colouring and shading....as I said before I personally like this kind of style but for what you've done here things look a bit off. the colors give a missconception of light direction along with the shadowing on her body which makes it seem like theres a bright light in the bottom right which would lead to less shading on her right side and....below her? I'm assuming thats her shadow stretching along the floor.

Fearneh responds:

Thank you for the feed back i wasnt too happy with this myself tbh i've not drawn for a while so im a little rusty
im sure with some more work
i'll get everything right if i try something like this again
again thank you and i shall bare all this in mind with my next piece.

[Lyra]

As much as i'd like to say I love it, it has too many flaws.... I'ts a bit too cartoonish which in some cases can be good mattering on whos viewing it. 1-The lines don't flow fluidly at all and make her outline look composed of smaller straight lines. 2-The shading throughout the body leads to confusion of which direction the lightsource is comeing from (origionally looks like its from the top but the left leg makes it look like theres a brighter light above it). 3-The hands are ill proportioned along with both lips and her left shoulder looks off a bit...(fingers look like...sticks?, and her upper lip looks like it far out protrudes the bottom)