I loved the animation, and the music fits it well enough that I can get over the complete lack of sound effects - but somethings just feels off about that super intense cape...
When you're half asleep and mistake this for the real one, my bad...
I guess that's what high dose painkillers and 3 hours of sleep a day for a week do to you, I legitimately thought I watched the entire thing here, I'm actually losing my mind.
hahaha what r u on painkillers for? I just had knee surgery and was on hydromorphones
This felt different than normal, did you change something with facial expressions? Maybe I'm just crazy, but either way I'm loving this!
The music is a lot... gentler? Than I'm used to from you, it has a soft feel and I actually would REALLY like to be able to listen to it on repeat, too bad I'd have to choose between internet or buying the MP3 this month... hmm...
glad you like it!
I don't entirely mind the art, though I really wish both the audio was better (Both the voice quality, and the voice/music loudness ratio). It'd be nice if what was being said was lip synced, which it seemed like you did at one point, then gave up.
Also... was that a smoke detector at the start, when the announcer was... announcing?
My only problems with this one are it being incomplete, and your art lacking depth (It looks flat, which things like shadowing can help improve).
If you did all of the audio editing yourself, you're off to a GREAT start.
Thanks , and yes, i did everything by my self . Im a begginer And i never take classes of art or animation. I learn a lot thanks to Jazza
I enjoyed the randomness of it all, though I'd love to see a completed stand-alone project as well ;)
Honestly I can't suggest much based on just this, other than the obvious "You can improve overall" things.
Thank you for the feedback. :>
Hopefully my next project doesn't die like these have (my main problem seems to be finishing something to the end). I definitely could have done better on some of these, though. .w.
I always enjoy these, I just wish there was more that could be done with them without going outside it's own boundaries.
+1 for the Dr. Frankenstein joke.
I like that this feels alive, even though the arts so rough, though I have no idea what's going on here.
You did a decent job on the ambient and animation overall, but I'm getting the feeling that you'd have a hard time with eyelids (As they don't seem to exist here, that monsters pupils literally just poof into existence!"
Thank you and i was very quickly with the eyelids and pupils, im getting stuck in the proyects and i start loosing interest in the proyect and i star a new one. This one i dont want to leave it unfinish so i do it quick and that is the result.
I want to start quick proyects because i work alone.
P.d. Sorry for my bad english spelling
Though I got a bit of a giggle out of the subject manner, this is some of the LAZIEST animation I have ever seen. Are they rigs? Whatever they are the arm movement makes them seem really alien, like someone in a human suit with their own arms out of it, but no control over the body.
Things don't always turn out the way you would like lol
Though I enjoy videos like these, between the sub-par stick figures (Did you use a mouse?) and the sudden loud music between scenes... I'm just not too crazy about this.
I do like the voice though, and the scenes are relatively well planned for what is being said.
I used a graphics tablet. Unfortunately I only had access to crappy software when making this...
The music so far is the number one criticized thing in this video and I will try to do better :)
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