jecjoker's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Dragon Ball Z (Freezer Alternative Ending)]

My only problems with this one are it being incomplete, and your art lacking depth (It looks flat, which things like shadowing can help improve).
If you did all of the audio editing yourself, you're off to a GREAT start.

XxFalopioxX responds:

Thanks , and yes, i did everything by my self . Im a begginer And i never take classes of art or animation. I learn a lot thanks to Jazza

[The Past 3 Years/Demo Reel]

I enjoyed the randomness of it all, though I'd love to see a completed stand-alone project as well ;)

Honestly I can't suggest much based on just this, other than the obvious "You can improve overall" things.

Oddlem responds:

Thank you for the feedback. :>
Hopefully my next project doesn't die like these have (my main problem seems to be finishing something to the end). I definitely could have done better on some of these, though. .w.

[NWAR: Cold Open]

I always enjoy these, I just wish there was more that could be done with them without going outside it's own boundaries.
+1 for the Dr. Frankenstein joke.

[Monster Swamp]

I like that this feels alive, even though the arts so rough, though I have no idea what's going on here.
You did a decent job on the ambient and animation overall, but I'm getting the feeling that you'd have a hard time with eyelids (As they don't seem to exist here, that monsters pupils literally just poof into existence!"

XxFalopioxX responds:

Thank you and i was very quickly with the eyelids and pupils, im getting stuck in the proyects and i start loosing interest in the proyect and i star a new one. This one i dont want to leave it unfinish so i do it quick and that is the result.

I want to start quick proyects because i work alone.

P.d. Sorry for my bad english spelling

[The Announcement]

Though I got a bit of a giggle out of the subject manner, this is some of the LAZIEST animation I have ever seen. Are they rigs? Whatever they are the arm movement makes them seem really alien, like someone in a human suit with their own arms out of it, but no control over the body.

Derp-dee-derp responds:

Things don't always turn out the way you would like lol

[The People You'll Meet at Fast Food]

Though I enjoy videos like these, between the sub-par stick figures (Did you use a mouse?) and the sudden loud music between scenes... I'm just not too crazy about this.
I do like the voice though, and the scenes are relatively well planned for what is being said.

Alexkazam222 responds:

I used a graphics tablet. Unfortunately I only had access to crappy software when making this...
The music so far is the number one criticized thing in this video and I will try to do better :)

[Farg N Funkle 1]

I enjoyed this more than I should have, in ways that cannot be explained.
I know it was probably intended for the crazy of it all, but I can't help but wish the backgrounds (including the blazing house) were a bit cleaner.

[I Am The Sand Guardian]

Though I like the references here, I'm not blown away in any specific way. I'm actually kind of irked that he went from telling the ocean to fuck off, to telling Rengar to.

[HunniePap / Underpop]

I ABSOLUTELY lost it at the end, I can't even. People had to come in and check on me, then they didn't get the joke because they don't play these games :*(

[Dumbnuts And Dragons: Egg Salad]

It took awhile to get it from YT to here, but I enjoyed it overall. The animation was alright, as was the voice acting.
I can say that I'd like it more with some subtle sound effects, like footsteps. But that can be tough to do just starting out, with little to no audio experience.

MasterCyconide responds:

Thank you for your constructive criticism! I hope to improve in the future.